UNLOVED

I sit in there, lying on the couch
Trying to figure out what went wrong.
Thinking of the follow ups, i try to smile
Know what ? It just fades in a while.

They question,
"Have no abettor"?
I reciprocate,
"No
I ..
Long for one,
I ..
Crave for one,
But I ..
Attain none".

I smile
And I ..
Just smile
But
It again fades in a while.

Author's Note

Well, Thanks Danny.
I couldn't think of a suitable title for the poem. And then your poem striked, i gave it this title then. It somewhat resembles to the title of your poem, the idea is entirely different though.
I hope you dont mind :)

And all the readers out there, i hope you enjoy this one.

Reviews

[Mufeen]

Mazay daar !
Jus luv it ...Mujhe jaisa banda v interest lenay LGA..yeah badi baat hai :p

[Shah Sabia]

Haha thankyou :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. I don't mind. Use whatever title you wish. :) i'm glad my stuff helped. And as for the poem, i love it! 100 points. :) keep it coming.

[Shah Sabia]

Lol thankyou so much ;)
I am glad you dont mind and i am more than glad for this wonderful review.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :) :) :)

[Shah Sabia]

:) :) :) :) :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Why are ya winking??? lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

:-) :-) :-) :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D lol :-D :-D :-D................

[Shah Sabia]

:') :'D :'P :') :@ :') :$ :¥ Lol

[Shah Sabia]

Just smiling. Lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. I meant the very first comment you posted on this review. Lol.

[Shah Sabia]

Oh sorry :p
By mistake you know ? :'D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol :) just been curious. That all. Lol :) :) :) ;) lol. :)

[Shah Sabia]

Lots of "Lol" you know :'P

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hahaha :) i know...i use it too often.Lol lol.

[Shah Sabia]

I know it too Lol :) :'D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hahahaha :) hehehe :) :) :) :) lol

[Shah Sabia]

Happy to see a friend laugh because of me :) :) :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol :) :) :) :) :)