A Perfect Nap

Leave me lie on languid winds
Allow my respite on clouds
Stretch my weary muscles
To the corners of the galaxy
Kiss my face with misty breezes
That smell of home
Bid my float upon the waters of Saturn
Guide my flight to the edge of the endlessness
Cover my nakedness with the eclipse
Of a thousand moons
And cast my celestial hammock
From trunk of mighty oak
Onto the last star on the left

Reviews

[wordman]

almost celestial,i enjoyed the trip

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you, wordman.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Pete]

we all long for it and here you give it to us. the perfect blissful water-bed write inducing slumber courtesy of mother nature herself. great natural imagery. excuse me while a catch a few z's now as you lull me into la-la land ... :)

[Nipplegrinder]

Wow. Thanks for the kind review, Pete. I'm pleased you stopped by.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

This is a heavenly lift into the skies and cosmic places of wonder. The part about the last star on the left made me think of a wishing star. The innocence of hoping on a wishing star, mingling with thoughts of cozy hominess made me want to wrap up in this nap as well.. so peaceful and wondrous.

[Tony Jordan]

This is very eloquent N/grinder.
I think 'Bid my float' should be 'Bid me float'...

The final triplet is ...well...it's cosmic ! ;))

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you, Tony! I will certainly consider the edit you suggest.