And

And

A Poem by Nipplegrinder

The silk sheets
glisten
Listen lil girl
Curl
Right 'round this beckoning finger
Crawl to me with leering eyes
Set your sights upon me
Drop the curtains
Draw the drapery
I pull the blinds
and gather darkness
Surrender is palpable
and smells of musk
mirth, and leather
Your downcast gaze
and
The silk sheets
And

© 2017 Nipplegrinder


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And???!! I love that!!! You leave it hanging with an and.. so much weight in that one tiny word.. so much we know is to come from this beginning.. chapters upon chapters to unfold in their tale.. this is merely the flirt and invitation.. the reply and the setting of the stage for what's to play. Ohhh and.....

Posted 7 Years Ago


The best erotica is that which suggests, rather than bludgeons. Good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

8 Years Ago

Thank you, John. That's a wonderful thing to say.

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Nipplegrinder
Nipplegrinder

St. Louis , MO



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50 year old Gentleman. I write a lot about love. And I write about BDSM. I love to write erotic poems. But, I like to think I do it in a tasteful way. I like to read and review the works of the many.. more..