She Always Leaves The Moonlight On

She always leaves the moonlight on
She knows the depths of darkness
I traverse
I know that light
I know it's for me

She always leaves the petals open
The flower of temptation

She returns as she forever has
Dancing each moment she breathes
Into morn'

She shines into heels
Wheels
Glinting and still fading

Luna is my lover
I saw her yesterday

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is killer beautiful & original way of stating an everyday feeling we can all relate to. I love the way you use dynamic word choices to bring your message alive. I'm a moonchild, so I can feel this one as defining my nights quite aptly! *sigh!* (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

[Nipplegrinder]

Wow! Thank you so much, Margie.
Killer beautiful?
No one has ever said those particular words about my writing.
Thank you, dear girl.
I appreciate it.

[barleygirl]

Killer beautiful is when it takes your breath away *smile*

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Such beauty. Such wonder in her graces and her kindness. She is that kind of perfection we all long to be.. to know she gave you exclusive light and cared for you in this way, tended to your needs and wants.. to offer a temptation that wasn't a tease, merely a hint of what she planned to fulfill; this all is a mesmerizing dance of beauty and love.

[Ardra]

Reads like the Luna loves to tease you and calms you at same time.... this is a very sweet poem.. :)
kind of giving hope to keep going on...

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you! I'm pleased you saw so much in this.

[Olivia]

loved this....beautiful..

[Nipplegrinder]

I'm quite pleased you like it! Thank you so much!