Owl Emotions

Random Thoughts

As the breezy night turned young,

All the far killed emotions sprung. 

Sleeping on bed with eyes wide open,

I hear words of my heart that 's broken. 

As I plug my earphones on,

Songs push me to where your memories haunt.

The big gulp on my throat makes me scared,

I hide my reality under the blanket.

Truth still stand naked in front of me,

Change will endure but not my dreams

Reviews

[Confuser]

your (my) memories: My reality hidden under the blanket I wear? Had to write this down quickly: It is great as it is. When I first read it, I love it and still do didn't see anything I would think of changing, not even the (MY). Thank you for this wonderful piece of writing. Dale

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank You For Your Kind Review Maam

[Confuser]

Y/W Sir........................................:D]]

[Nitesh Mahabal]

hmmmmmmmmm :p

[Confuser]

hmmmmmmmmfalcetoooooohummmmmm: D

[Nitesh Mahabal]

haa??????????????????????????

[Confuser]

I suppose a silly joke, you wrote hummm...so to demonstrate, a high pitch "hummm" I tried "falcetto."

[Nitesh Mahabal]

ooooohhhhhhhh :O

[Confuser]

I like the music better, what a great voice. Thanks.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

hahahahaha

[Confuser]

I get dizzy with this merry go round, let us please jump off, anytime.....talking to the computer god of this website.

[shweta@castle]

Each couplet is agonizing yet passionate. This is indeed relatable and a beautiful piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the story and powerful ending.
"Truth still stand naked in front of me,
Change will endure but not my dreams"
I like the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Natalie]

This piece you have written is very simple, only consisting of couplets for each stanza. However, it is very beautifully written! Great poem.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank u maam for ur kind review

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

This was a very heart felt
piece.



Such a stunning and powerful
Emotional piece thank you for sharing.



God bless. Benita

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thanku Benita. Good to see u back.
Regards.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're quite welcome. was a pleasure to read thank you. God bless. Benita

[Sami Khalil]

You write from the heart wonderfully...:)......

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank u So mch sir

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....

[Emily]

I love all the lines in this poem!
You did a great job!

[Nitesh Mahabal]

So happy u found dis great n lvd it. Thank alot maam

[Laura Lynn]

You write from your need to write and having the perspective of a man. I see yourself in this poem, it's desire to take the dreams into reality, or reality into the real world.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Quite Right!!! Thank U So Much Maam

[Haley Wilson]

I can relate too this all too well. Beautifully written with such strong emotion!

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank U So Much Maam