Delusive Dream

Just Woke Up One Morning With These Dream

When the gates of heaven closed,

My world came trembling down,

For I had eyes, but no vision,

A beating heart but no hope,

From now I could only live and see,

And then in the darkness,

I saw a man, struggling with himself,

I made friends with him,

And the universe gave me back my strength,

Like someone once said,

"Life is a pretty awful place to not have a friend."

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Yes, loosing your soul into darkness is something no one wants to go thru. Is always good to have a friend to help you and encourage along the way.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

yes thats the whole idea of this write up ma'am.

[anne]

very true and beautifully penned piece..:))

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank You Ma'am

[Nitesh Mahabal]

I applaud you... Loved this.. even the topic is unique and and the words places me there with your character.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thanks alot ma'am (:

[wordman]

we face reality,we can`t be alone,we wasn`t designed that way,great write

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank You Sir

[Emily]

I just love the first line!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank You Ma'am

[Pushkar Prabhat]

true . .......!!!!
brilliant writing......!!!
i loved it!!!!
:)
happy holi :)
may your life be colourful and cheerful!!!!

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank you & wish u the same Sir

[....................]

Life without someone to share aspects of it with is indeed an awful place. Nice write Nitesh; thanks for sharing.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Well said, Thank you Sir

[Sindu]

Brilliant imagery and emotions. Well chosen words. That's all one needs, a friend, a helping hand, a smile to make them move through the wretched journey... sometimes that is inside ourselves.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Yeah. I'm finding mine within. Thank you Ma'am

[Deepika]

We look out for dear ones while in gruelling situations.But when we realize our inner strength, we come out with flying colors.Self help is the best help.
Glad to have you back after a while. Good job :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Took some time off to learn. You have written quite many new one. Will read it in few time. Thank You Ma'am

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your wisdom.
"Life is a pretty awful place to not have a friend."
We need our family and friendship. True wealth is many friends and family near. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank you Sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.