Blue

Blue

A Poem by Nitesh Mahabal

Thoughts run wild,
Amidst dark night ,
With no one by my side,
I am feeling blue today

Keeping expectations high,
Time passes by,
With no hint of life,
I feeling blue today

Surrounded by despair,
Living seems unfair,
Adrifting unaware,
I am feeling blue today

© 2017 Nitesh Mahabal


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Sadly I can relate to this poem. I think at one point in our lives or another, we all have been there.

Posted 4 Years Ago


great poem i can relate to this poem and i really liked it and enjoyed reading it wonderful job keep up the great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Honest words and emotions shared. I could feel the sadness and the regret. Thank you Nitesh for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked the repitition. Very simple but speaks volumes, I like this the most about poetry.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

blue days are sad days,we look for something to hang on to but the day passes us by,but the sky isn`t always cloudy

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 26, 2017
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Nitesh Mahabal
Nitesh Mahabal

Toronto , Canada



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