My Heart

A little something that speaks for it self.

If hearts could speak

my heart doth beat

a thousand beats for you,

and if all is lost

my heart doth stop

for silence speaks the truth.

Reviews

[Honeypot]

Sorry. I didn't realize you were posting here. This was really good though. Sad. Your heart stops beating for her because she isn't communicating? Or is you heart not beating because all is lost. I think this is really intriguing. Did you send it to her?

[chloe cruz]

Wow, I really loved this. Even though it was so short- it was so perfect. You got your point across, really well.

"and if all is lost my heart doth stop
for silence speaks the truth."

Simply loved the ending of it. Beautifully done.

Chloe.