We're both broken

Sleeping with the sun turned on

youre the one ive been dreaming of

but you never saw me all because

Im the angel that always falls

Im always falling for you

lost in you all i think

Im right in my place

a peaceful grace

safe inside and ignorent too

Im more at peace when im with you

but i look back with melaoncholy

to see the world

a labyrinth of violence and hate

and i know one day youll leave me to

protect us all from the things we do

but you can nevwe fully save us

we are all ignorant when were in love

love for greed

love for hate

love for everything in between

and you will protect us

with the broken wing

Reviews

[Cerulean Kitty]

I'm not sure if you intended to, but you left out all forms of punctuation. If you meant to do that (which seems to fit the poem rather well) just ignore me.

It's a very nice poem, very well written. It flows perfectly. Maybe it's because I'm in a poetic mood today. It seems reminiscent of a poem from a famous poet whom I just can't seem to recall at the moment. Nonetheless, I still liked this and found it very engrossing.

Anyway, great job on this. Keep writing.

-CK-