Bath

Sharp teeth

soft neck

Gentle peck

sweet release

 

Lover foe

water moat

Hands on throat

head below

 

 

Reviews

[TheElfPrincess]

Short yet powerful, for such a small poem it says very much. I liked it very much, a very good poem. The first sentence of the second stanza is my favorite.

[Poetic Pieces]

So, it's a couple in a bath tub getting frisky and then one drowns the other, right?
I like it!
It says a lot for so little!

~-~Bells

[S.J.Floreen]

Bit morbid.