Jumble

Been awhile
I know it's hard to listen
I know it's hard to see
Things that we go through on a daily
I keep messing up my life
Yeah people say "it's not your fault"
I know what I've done
I've seen how it affects people
I can't sleep for a cent
I'll lay there tossing and turning
I ask for forgiveness
They just leave
My mind is a jumble
You may not understand where it's at
But I'll try to explain

Reviews

[no tell writer]

Such an emotional read, sorry for whatever it is that is bothering you.

[Tricessimus]

T.S. says he wouldn't leave for a hundred cents. He also said something about "not hitting" nix and you... no, it was "missing". Lovely poem, "I can't sleep for a cent" has my mind reeling and rolling.

[Chris Shaw]

You certainly create the mood of a jumbled mind. When we can:t think straight, it is easy to make mistakes. It is good to own it and offer to make an explanation, especially if some damage has been inflicted. Good to read you Nomo.

Chris