Tangerine steps

Millions miles of tangerine steps,

Non-stop trotting the globe of desires,

Geographical clashes of inspiring dreams,

Topographic falls of unconquered empires.

 

Eastern eyes are sparkling with no stars for me,

Western smiles are burning with a frozen fire,

I am seeking and seeking with a hope of slavery,

Like a hungry spirit of a hunting vampire.

 

Never exhausted and forever enchanted,

With tangerine steps continue my traveling,

I will find you, my love, wherever you’re hiding

Wherever you sit and patiently wait for me!

Reviews

[Neon]

Life's filled with dreams and the love's filled with scent of angels's afeems .. Am glad to read this coolio write. Sorry but as i always say i gotta say it again, your cool!
I loved this stuff, am glad that before leaving the site am able to read such kinda great writers stuffs.

[Writer #00]

This was refreshing, like a juicy tangerine. Does the slavery line refer to the hope slaves felt to be free?

zest/100

[Oblivion]

This is soooo passionate. The search, for the one, is one we all have known and one that continues for many into what seems forever. You write so beautifully. Thank you for sharing.

[Muse]

Sounds like you follow the foot steps of another...blinded by the beauty of a sunrise...colored with yellow and blue...behold the tangerine skies. You cross the invisible space of amusement and fantasy.

[Robin]

in this dance upon the blue earth , we move , we flow , we discover

[Jason Dyer]

Didn't know vampires had spirits. ;) Well constructed and very atmospheric!

[Nona]

spirit does not care if you are vegetarian or drink blood! spirit is an engine of endless suffering with a hope for everlasting happiness…:)
... thanks a lot for your comment!