Just a smile!

 

When I am sad -
The doors are closed to a giant universe of beauty and light…

 

When I am asleep -
No doors exist back to reality from the mystery site…

 

When I am happy -
The doors are exploding; illusive glass doors are broken, fragile…

 

With no doors,
I can penetrate your reality,  can be a smile in your eyes…

 

Just a smile!

Reviews

[Neon]

Yeah .. very coolio write. I love seeing someone as beautiful as you feel 'Happy' .. Keep on!

[Saumya]

thats really ................very sweeeeeeeeeeeet and beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!

[Writer #00]

Penetrate my reality, eh? That sounds so sinister and underhanded--like subliminal messages in commercials and kids' shows...but then it's just an innocent little smile that is supposed to affect my reality positively...guess I'm just paranoid. : )

-_o/100

[PurpleQuartz]

This is lovely. Very beautiful!

[Revery]

There is a lot to be said for just a smile. This is very sweet Nona, I especially liked, "can be a smile in your eyes"

[Circe]

totally beautiful! I am wowed..... and agree with the smile in the eyes! marvelous poem and punchline!

[Robin]

Smiles can hide daggers but the eyes , oh the eyes , they never lie .. as such , I look for the smile not upon the lips , but within the eyes

[Patrick Henry]

Your smile is going to start WW3..... and it sounds AMAZING!!! : ) Your "doors" were received to me as if they were your eyes. I have some carefree moments around the house in the "physical" world...lol, but this site surely brings out the rarest of smiles and openness I am not used to. You say that you are learning English right now, and seeing a poem like this...... it's pretty to see you express it so easily in ways...... Beautiful Nona. xoxo -Mark

[Nona]

Thank you for your nice words! I am glad we could explode the doors in a digital space of virtual interaction! :)