Do I like you?

Do I like you? �" I do not know

In the cosmos of my heart…

There is always open window;

There are no rotten shadows;

There is plenty room … for love!!!!

Do I like you? �" I won’t tell you!

Read between my trembling lips,

See in rainbow reflections,

Feel in icy-sparkling kiss…

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

It is very good, but, if i can impart some thought.. eliminate the punctuation.. all of it, and find a way to emphasize exactly what you are trying to say.. so that there is no need to add punctuation, use your thoughts and words (don't be afraid to swear or be harsh) you have something important to say here, and i think the readers aren't getting the whole picture.

[SuicidePact.]

This was really great :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Such tenderness and kind emotion in the poem. You create a vision of a friendship and the possibility of love with your words. I like the ending a lot. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Igor G. Balatsky]

'I'm afraid there is too much of me to stand me',
she told him sadly yesterday.
'You shouldn't worry: my heart is rather spacious
to hold you, honey'.

[Kala Benfield]

powerful . I felt the tention on the one that you adore so much. Made me think of the perosn i love very very much !

[hmm]

This is really amazing here,
Beuatiful write.

[Po3tByH3art]

This is very well spoken and ur mind is opened freely I see, keep it up!

[Kat Wildd]

I love this poem...I like the thought behind the lines

"Read between my trembling lips,

See in rainbow reflections,

Feel in icy-sparkling kiss…"

[symmetryAsymmetry]

You reaffirm that women are mystical creatures...they know their angelic powers and love to use them :-P
Also, it's true that love must be felt not told...
This is beautiful :-)

[Davey Jones]

Nice, could really see the tone and imagery in the poem