Time

Time changes everything, sometimes you're valued

Sometimes you're neglected

Sometimes you feel worthful

Sometimes you feel rejected

Sometimes you're glad

Sometimes you feel so bad

Sometimes you beam in success

Sometimes you weep in loss

Sometimes you just want to be alone

Sometimes your heart cries when someone is gone...

Author's Note

Comments and reviews are most welcome..

Reviews

[Saman Fatima]

These 10 lines explains the whole life... so eloquent. Our life is meant to be full of ups and downs. Time never remains the same, but whatever it is it's for a reason. Sometimes you're blessed with best moments when you are not expecting them and sometimes your life gets dark despite all your struggles. But even those worst moments of life are there to give you a chance to grow.

[Noor.92]

Thank you for such nice review..!

[Lola_Bee]

lovely writing, and a precious description of time. worded easily, good piece

[Noor.92]

Thanks so much.. :)

[Hímayun kuræshýe]

...and sometimes your heart cries when someone is gone!

...and when they leave ,u r nt the same person anymore! nice use of contrast !

[Noor.92]

True.. It changes people
Thanks for the review.. :-)

[Cool Girl]

That is so touching. Even though it is a short poem, the words are very powerful and made me want to cry.

[Noor.92]

I wish life is not full of sudden unexpected changes and just goes on smoothly and happily..
Thankyou so much for the review..:-)