Always smile..

On the face, there is a smile

In the heart, there is a dismal

Don't worry, that's not a facade

It's my way of appearing brittle

Author's Note

Reviews are welcom...

Reviews

[L3W3LYN]

For only four lines this was written to capture the readers emotions so well.

[Noor.92]

thanks, Your words mean a lot to me.. :)

[Colleen A]

It has a musical sound when you read it out loud, I really liked how you got so much thought across in only a couple lines.

[Noor.92]

Thanks for your encouraging remarks Colleen.. :)

[CoffeePoet]

very nice !!! and powerful

[Noor.92]

Glad you liked it.. :)

[CoffeePoet]

;) your welcome

[Hímayun kuræshýe]

few words ....but an ocean of emotions .

[Noor.92]

thanks a lot..

[Dakota Jean]

It's really difficult to capture this much feeling into a short poem, but you did it. Good job (:

[Noor.92]

thanks Dakota. Means a lot to me.. :)

[Rachelle]

Whatever the body shows, the brain will eventually think. Keep smiling. Keeping hoping and watch the world transform about you.

[Noor.92]

Deep True words...

[Peyton]

I really think this is amazing It captures a lot in just 4 lines. Also just the type of thing I have been struggling with.

[Noor.92]

Thanks so much. Encouraging remarks always help a person in grooming...

[Lydia Shutter]

So often we plaster a smile on our faces when our heart is breaking. It is a bit of a facade though....we portray what we want the world to know and hide what we feel is ours alone. Very emotive write. Lydi**

[Noor.92]

True words...
Thanks so much, Lydia... :)