Good Old Man

Just because I had a heart to write.. ;)

Deep down in the good old town

There lives an old man so brown

 

His eyes are kind, his heart pure and warm

And he makes everyone happy and calm

 

With kids, he is always way too funny

And gives them cookies without any money

 

He is a man who is so bright

He is happy to bake cookies at night

 

Each morning, he sits up in his cheerful stall

And his costumers are all elder and small

 

His cookies melt everyone’s heart

For they are filled with love and warmth

Author's Note

Happy Reading :)

Reviews

[merit]

Haha
such a sweet simple poem
I liked the rhythm in it- since I like to write like this;))

[Noor.92]

thanks for liking, friend.. ;)

[Kevin Shea]

Don't usually like poetry, but this was a cheerful read. Well done!

[Noor.92]

Thanks Kevin! Your comment made my day ;-)

[Aanand Madhav]

Feeling nostalgic, reminds me of my childhood. Happy reading

[Noor.92]

Thanks for liking Aanand..:-)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful poem, Noor. Heartwarming. Thank you for sharing. :) Rudi

[Noor.92]

Thank you for such nice words Rudi... :)

[Mia]

This made me smile. It reminded me of my grandmother. Really nice writing!

[Noor.92]

Thank you for appreciation Mia.. :)

[anurag]

lovely and heart warming, reminds me of pleasant mornings

[Noor.92]

Thanks a lot for liking Anurag.. :)

[anurag]

Do you mind doing me a favor? Would you be kind to review mine please?? i want to this beforehand, i didn't compliment because i wanted you to read mine, i mean what i said. peace out. :D

[Noor.92]

yes sure no problem ;)

[R Smith]

Happy reading indeed, such a man would be welcome the world over, it would make this world a much better place, nice writing Noor :)

[Noor.92]

Glad you liked it Richard :-)

[mackenzieeewrites]

i enjoyed this, it reminded me of my grandfather who passed. it gave me a warm feeling :)

[Noor.92]

I am happy that you enjoyed it..:-)

[Samuel Dickens]

A sweet, gentle tale. Indeed, he is a "good old man". I once heard of a woman much like him, and she was called "The cookie lady".

[Noor.92]

Thanks for appreciation Samuel.. :)
indeed such simple hearted and gentle people are like precious gems among us..