That Girl

I am being made to do this by my evil girlfriend -_- LOL

That girl I dated said she loved me.
Then her love turn to hate

And mine turn into sorrow

I couldn’t forget her beautiful face for many years

My heart ached for her love

Silently hers ached for mine

I struggle day and night not to call her name.

But when I hear her name I feel like,

I am going to brake, like I am never going to be the same

Just like the ever changing rain, falling from a November sky

Just like that she takes be back to when I fell so deep into her eyes,

The love we held in full bloom for all to see!

Gazing into each others eyes for the love we saw was both strong and bold

Though we were laughed at and made fun of

Our love stayed true!

Then that’s when I knew we were met to be.

I hope that one day she’ll come back to me.

Author's Note

tell me what you think i am not the best but i am the worst LOL

Reviews

[Abhinav]

hehe, this is really cute

[Dimples87]

This is beautiful. The words soothe a piece of your soul and warm your heart at the same time. Very beautiful - great read.

[Akshat♥]

ohh...nicely written...she will definately come if she got the clue about this...sad poem...lot of emotions are there which make me cry a bit..good work:)

[Living Proof.]

so cute.

[Kelley]

Aw the pain of the one who got away. Been there done that.
I saw a simple little mistake in the line...
"Just like that she takes be back to when I fell so deep into her eyes,"
Might want to fix that then it will be perfect.

[Just Plain Me]

HA! Got you to post it :) And I am not evil you a*****e! lol It's really good hun...deal with it. (You should post the other one to)