Stealing a kiss

Taking your hands in mind

Holding you tight in my eyes

Just the sound of us breathing

Is like nothing I can comprehend

Holding you again

Loving you again

Is like giving a starving man food

Being so close

Yet so far

Can be life threaten

If you’re to blind to see

That just by your touch I am happy

Then I am here to tell you

Just by stealing one kiss

I am set free

If you can do me one favor

Just one simple favor

It’s let me steal my last kiss before

I go into a sleep so deep

That I never come back

I love you with all that I can

So I steal this last kiss

And let my heart poor out into your hands

And let my body lie in peace.

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

The dreamy poetry not usually my bag. This thing exists on mutiple levels and saves it for the audeince who stray from the sap.
The idea of one last kiss, the sealing kiss, could be the death and the sleep so deep can also be the final request OF death's kiss to release from the world.
It gets both audeinces and holds them in place, like a breath
Nice work

[Sammy]

There are a few errors but i liked this poem, its really sweet. :)

[Nicole]

SOme errors, but good over-all. Liked the ending.

[Annie29]

I LOVED this.
For the first time ever since being on this site (which has been a while)
I wrote down another authors work.
It shall hang on my wall for inspiration,
but don't worry I shall credit you (:

[DVampire]

this is so cool

[Just Plain Me]

Gah...you're evil. You're not supposed to write something this sweet when I'm mad at you -_-
But I do love the poem, and if you ever call this one crap I hurt you. It's really sweet. I love you Mathew :]