Realities End

Realities End

A Poem by Noting Society

I tried to believe that you were different,

But the truth just let me down.

Realities patterns

Were beneath a see through surface.

The world will keep spinning

But its made out of mostly water

So wherever I stand I’m still going to sink.

I keep grasping for land

But the world just shuts me up.

Stuck in the ocean

Where buried treasure is left unfound.

And I clinched onto you for a while.

To keep my head above the water.

But we ended like the titanic.

Never letting go…

But in the end one of still drowns.

© 2015 Noting Society


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There is always at least one casualty when love dies... very nice piece of writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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