My Universe

She has wrapped her soul around the universe, that I call my own
She is in the very air I breathe.
When I look up at the stars at night
She makes them burn
And soar across the vast skies
As I lay on this grassy hill.
She is always with me.
How could I ever ask for more?

Author's Note

Critisim welcome? Does it need more? I feel like it might.

Reviews

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now i was listening one song . there sing HER SOUL . again it s very gentle . like you call for compassion at this world. i like it.