Lost

When you look into the mirror

What do you really see?

A young and simple girl

Just staring without glee.

If i could freeze that moment

And look inside her soul

I would see all her hopes and dreams

Being sucked into a hole.

I watch her inner beauty

As it starts to fade away

There's nothing left inside of her

Nothing except a dull grey

So when you look back at the mirror

What do you really see?

A girl who has forgotten

Of how she used to be

there's nothing else that you can do

as you see, that girl is me!

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[Hidden heartbeats]

You seem to be having some sort of problems from within, I wrote something I thought would be poignant for you;

As I stand before my mirror, know that I can see,
Exactly what this mirror shows and how much of it is me,
I give my heart and soul to you in hopes that you can see,
That mirrors reflect our hearts, and my hearts not owned by me.

I wish that j could help you, and fill your soul with light,
I wish that I could tell you that it's allright to loose some fights,
I wish that I could send my love and show you wrong from right,
And everything that we could do to restore your perfect sight.

Your blind right now it's clear to see your beauty hasn't faded,
Your inner soul that burns within has surely become jaded,
But please fear not, on what we see, and why you've not been aided,
Help is here, and very near, it's just that it's been shaded.

Accept our love from me and all and find that inner strength,
And live once more, our muse and star...
~Fin.

Because...no matter whom you are or what your going through...know that your somebodys Rock, and anchor, and to them...seeing you implode is a fate worse than death.

[Novicepoet14]

Wow that is beautiful. Thank you.