Unchosen Heroes Book 1 Cracked Earth

A Book by Michelle

Prophecy is hogwash. There may be tales of four chosen heroes but these four don't want to hear them. Each has their own reason to adventure: Too Help Validation Escape Or just for the story

Chapters

Chapter 1: Chance meetings
Chapter 2: Things corrupted

© 2017 Michelle

Author's Note

This is the first in a long story written by me and my husband for fun. Since his passing I've decided to edit and rework it a little to see if i can get it published. the series would likely be 4 books with the first 2 mostly written and the last two plotted out.
I mainly want feedback on the pacing, dialog, characterization and if the world building and descriptions are clear to a reader.