You Live So You Smile

Simply put.

You live, so you smile.
You smile, so you laugh.
You laugh, so you cry.
You cry, so you understand.
You understand, so you learn.
You learn, so you achieve.
You achieve, so you suceed.
You succeed, so you thrive.
You thrive, so you live.
You live, so you smile.

Author's Note

Please say what you live for!

Reviews

[annabellee]

Wow this is great. I like the circle the poem makes.
Very good :)

[Risaun]

Bravo! Oh my goodness, this poem REALLY touched my soul. I thank you SO much for being willing, and obviously purposed, to share your writing with the world! You never know who may stumble upon what you write and it turn out to be just what they needed to hear. I was deeply inspired as I read this. Thank you! You are BLESSED! :)

[SEO]

I like how straightforward this is. It's simple but true which is what makes it beautiful.