Ode To Suicide

Just so you know, I am not suicidal...but I have been...and this is how it felt to me. ALSO...I am not condoning the act of ending your life...this is merely an expression of a dark time in my life.

You are my friend
I know that no matter
What I do or what happens
You’ll be there for me
With arms open wide
Whispering

Come closer, delve deeper
Be with me forever

I know you’ll never judge me
You will just accept
And cover my pain
With a welcome blanket of black
I will be comforted by your song

Come closer, delve deeper
Be one with me forever

You are my angel
I know that it does not matter
How stupid I’ve been, or careless
You will not care
You will embrace me
And stroke my cheek
You will whisper

You are here, you are mine
And nothing will hurt you
You’re with me forever

And as I drift
I will close my eyes
I will let you soothe me
Mend my broken spirit
And heal my broken heart
My lids will flutter
I will lay my head on your shoulder
A firm smile on my lips
I will not notice when you leave me
Or care
That you’ve already found another friend
And will whisper

Come closer, delve deeper
Be with me forever
 

Reviews

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WOW! Very nice. The tone is right on for the message that you are conveying. The imagery is sharp. I can see the interactions between the characters.

[laceyjane23]

this is a very emotional poem, i hope that you no longer feel this way because your writing is beautiful and i think that you have a gift for writing so keep on writing!!! i look forward to reading more of your work
laceyjane