The Universe: Our Epilogue

The Unforeseen, Yet Beautiful Continuation To Obbligato

He emerges from the village and reaches his enlightened position
Unknown to him 
The walk has fixed his feet as the center of the new solar
There He Shines
Visual Echoes Of Obbligato
He sits and emits
This
And that which
He stays oblivious to
His metaphysical energy
Reaching the very corners of the solars expanse
Yet the peak of his core
remains stagnant
Begin the divine rotation
Orbits aline
Allowing the communication between quasi-incestuous minds
Solar winds as their herald
They sit
And relate
Hydrogen their true state
Using the origins of time and space
To enunciate
The laws that govern,
Her power
To freely revolve
Within and around our globe
Observing our axis
Independently shifting the bulk of its mass
Her orbit the catalyst
For the organic transport of energy
Sculpting mosaics from the rock face
Illuminating the opaque
Through these winds
He finds the strength of the pride
A luscious mane
Exudes
The combined wisdom of all those she's ever known
A future transaction is agreed
 
So it begins
Time divides into twenty nine point five
The circulation
Her alpha at the lunar
Where she appears orange in colour
He praises her for her new shade
But she reminds him of his wade, the walk
The grass he embraced 
Opening him to the solar 
So he sees he's its sole provider
Uttering his true name
Obbligato
Still he emits with out accepting
An invite to the new stage of their encounter
Nieuw Haarlem: The Equator
Here all things lay equal and opposite
Balance as its foundation
Perfection as its building blocks
With her power she crafts a city
Creating Heights
Skylines
Peaks
Valleys
Arches
Landmarks
Coastline
And at its heart
A marble effigy of his being
Perfection made from her hand
Inviting him towards her nature
He embraces it fully
Showing her the intricate parts of it formulation
Depicting the work of the divine
Exploring the entire city
Atom by Atom
Pushing her to take pride in her handy work
He draws up maps to mark and locate 
Each particle
Remembering the directions 
Flows of currents
The speeds at their junctions
The contours indulged in
 
Many a night spent chanting their names
It is here she sees
The spot of a magnetic block
Synthesis used to fill the deficit
Fallacy at the equator 
Destruction imminent
Wildly 
Naturally stable particles react 
The sudden change in climate
A cease to the harmony in the heavens
Nieuw Haarlem is eroding
His presence becoming a void
Expectations of her first creation
Unfulfilled to such a dimension
Forsaking the city they thrived in
They ascend
The orbit complete
Twenty nine point five
Her omega at the solar
Obbligato reflected
He sees
The transaction complete
They linger till 30
By 31 
Her crescent
The final reflection
Now equipped
The Earth requires her to follow its orbit 
Before she leaves he asks The Moon to remember
Because of her
Everyday The Sun shines brighter 

Author's Note

Please Be As Honest And Frank As Possible. I Need To Hear FULL Criticism

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

Holy Sh**.. (sorry) this is phenomenal.. I so love it all.. There is something going on with this Alpha/Omega energy.. You have penned the dance of the cosmos well.. and The transaction complete
They linger till 30
By 31
Her crescent
The final reflection
Now equipped
The Earth requires her to follow its orbit
Before she leaves he asks The Moon to remember
Because of her
Everyday The Sun shines brighter" perfect...x

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[Mbali]

Amazing, i love it