Dark

Another shot at a quick-thought Lanturne. Syllable pattern: 1-2-3-4-1

None

Can run

From Darkness

Because it is

Us

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

Darkness hides in everyone. We've all got a shadow. Is Lanturne a form? I've never heard of it. Interesting. I may try one, if only I could think of a topic. Back on topic, great piece.

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you very much. =D Lanturne is another Japanese form I believe. As you can see it goes with five lines and a syllable pattern of 12341 I'll be anxious to read one of your own.

[Falling Leaf.]

Any ideas on what I should write one about?

[ObscurityNone]

Maybe the life cycle of a branch? (just popped in my head)

[Falling Leaf.]

Hmmm. I'll give it a try.