Disconnected Lady

Disconnected Lady

A Poem by ObscurityNone
"

Too many.

"

Lustful

She pursues with

That ever callow heart

Without doubt, or knowledge of her

True self                            

© 2012 ObscurityNone


Author's Note

ObscurityNone
My first try at a Cinquain.

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a deep portrait, you're a natural at this writing stuff :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

13 Years Ago

Thank you, that means quite a lot to hear feedback like that.

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