Hanged Over Yonder

Little bit of, huh?

Dry eyed cry

Mouth gaped open wide

Calmly in, calmly out

Parched and hollowed

Past acts bring regret

No

The condition brings regret

Never fear, get off your a*s

Orange juice does the trick

Reviews

[ImperialTroll]

Very nice. It's not long but very effective and deep. Simplicity is always a plus. Great work!

[ObscurityNone]

Thanks, it's always good to hear positive feedback.