Knighting Flux

Bran

Meld in your deep

Truths expire

Lives in end with crimes by fire

Heart-felt your touch

Brought to crutch, and made ill

Irreparable

Broke that heart, from long ago

While holding dear, that favorite pose

No more I hear

And no more I smile

Life in digress

Self-substantial

In dead of night, I learn myself

With temporal feats, and ungainly lures

Muttered but spoken whole

Cannot keep track, of these words

Fueling impulse

To hell with it, and your boon

Left smothered, discreet

Upside and down

Author's Note

Reviews

[Circe]

like the language in this.... gives it a medieval tone.. with temporal feats and ungainly lures, that just sounds awesome...! and of course are meaningful too... part of that learning of self... of always lessons.... such discoveries can be hard to swallow... you look for them while i'm too afraid to look! excellent piece.

[Tardisbaby]

I like that the rhythm is very clean and clear. Also, I love the word choice. It's a perfect ratio of simple and complex words. Nice work!

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"In dead of night, I learn myself

With temporal feats, and ungainly lures

Muttered but spoken whole

Cannot keep track, of these words"

~ it's great to read a familiar experience...articulated...so artistically...

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you.

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~ you're very welcome...

[InsanityWriter]

Last three lines were my favorites!! :D Stupendously penned. (; Great job!

[ObscurityNone]

Thanks, I.W.