Core-Muse

My Muse.

Silly knee-slapping fun

A little dose of some

Maybe what I need, a laugh or two

When you came around, unsuspected cheer

Passion and forbearance, you’re stronger

Smarter, and more pretty than you believe

Maybe an illusion of modesty you

Wear well, same to your hair, little lady x)

Make sure you keep being a dork

Make sure you keep that smile

Keep dancing crazy and showing        

The real you, despite what some

Tell you, and how they treat you

I see something callow, in all the right ways

You will be something truly special

To someone one day, keep that in mind

& never doubt your heart.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

wow very powerful

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you, though I would say... Soft-power. =)

[Circe]

really heartfelt words.. so much love and empowerment.. this is the kind of gift to carry with you always in life.. just to have that reminder that someone thought this of you, very precious and powerful!

that INTP appreciation for music, love it!! you're both lucky to be friends! :)

[ObscurityNone]

Yeah, I certainly think so. She makes me pretty happy, just to talk to her. Most people just make me feel distant and cynical. x) Thank you, Circe.

[Circe]

that's great, warm and genuine!

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I could almost put this to song, almost! What guitar chords would I use, what would be the chorus? I like the tone of it, spontaneous and relational.

I never met an INTP Aries before, I don't think.

[ObscurityNone]

Get an INTP, make 'em not look so bad, a lone wolf attitude, with some muscles. There you go, man. x) Thank you for reading, I appreciate your feedback.

[Annabelle Lee]

How sweet. I thoroughly enjoyed this and I bet your muse appreciated it.

[ObscurityNone]

She seemed to, yes. x)

[Chidoriflower]

This is lovely, V. A need side of you I haven't seen yet...keep up the good work!

[ObscurityNone]

This beautiful write made me smile :) soft, sweet, and yet well felt, this woman, or as you call her "Little Lady" is how you discribe her elusively beautiful, and how she sneaks in and out is like the panter in her, just she can disappear and give heads when she's back. Nice write! :)

- Elisa

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you, Elis.

:) my pleasure V.