[Sun Daisy]

Sadly, life isn't filled with,
sunshine and daisies.
Out world it packed with,
lunatics and crazies.

Our world today,
has gone insane.
Filled with,
liars, theives, and pain.

We get so blind,
it's hard to know,
what we should,
say or show.

Maybe should,
stop things from getting to hazy.
Maybe we should,
pick more daisies.

Author's Note

I'm not that good. Please constructed critizism only. (Sorry about my spelling)

Reviews

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I absolutely adore this poem. The descriptions and words flowed very deeply.
"Sadly, life isn't filled with,
sunshine and daisies.
Out world it packed with,
lunatics and crazies."
I've go to say, this phrase made me smile. And the last two lines were amazing! I love how the whole poem can be exactly about daisies, but also not. Great write! :)