Only One, Sentence

Describes how I feel in one sentence

I'm a wisp of fog on an invincible mirror of lies; a mirror that if shattered, will destroy every pass back to reality, sanity, and the truth I need to settle down in my oasis of ghosting thoughts.

Reviews

[Kaya]

It generally annoys me when someone posts just the one or two lines up here. But i think anything added to this would pale in comparison. This is beautifully written and thoroughly enjoyable. You have a true skill in the way you write, there is nothing in this sentence i would change.

[Leslie Philibert]

Good work, it reminds me that Ezra Pound wrote one of the most famous poems of all time in just one line, about the Metro in Paris. Like the punctuation, the first semi colon is perfect !

[Death Stalker]

Very interesting how you just sums it all up, I also like how you symbolize each "object" in the sentence. A job well done if you ask me.

[Clairabel]

Strong words delivered very well. I would like to see it elaborated on, but I guess that would go against the idea of it being just one sentence.

[The Jay]

Sums it up really.