With Love To You

Sing with baited breath
Eyes smoldering in the candle light
Touch shows the words that cannot be spoken to the ear
Your sounds are all you need to say
As fingers dance over silken skin
Let this moment tattoo your soul
So that this beauty may stay forever

Author's Note

Comment as you please.

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Have not been "tattooed" as often as I would have liked--nor, as recently. Still, I can recall that the lovely sentiments you so artfully describe had something to do with it. Have managed to cop a little beauty for myself--enough, I guess, to last the rest of the way.
Your poem is authentic--gorgeously so.

[SpokenWord]

Memories are tattoos of the soul that bring back the past in vivid color and memories of a scene like this is meant to last forever. Nice sultry write.

[Celeste21]

Intimate and passionate. A beautiful moment you caught on a sultry candle-lit night.

[Jess Holden]

Beautiful use of words :) love

[Lily Mae]

You capture that moment beautifully..x

[Tasha]

This was beautiful, you really captured true love.

[Aurora Lynn]

'Sing with baited breath
Eyes smoldering in the candle light'

Those were great lines. I really enjoyed reading this piece! It flowed really nicely! Thank you for writing.

[.......]

As fingers dance over silken skin
Let this moment tattoo your soul
So that this beauty may stay forever

I love these words here, This is a real lovely write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love in so few words. I like the gentle and kind statement of love. A wise person knows to go slow and easy to be able to remember every touch and gift of love. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Alicia Hirshey]

you capture true love.