A scented candle

When somebody leaves this earth, no matter how unimportant he or she was, one will always leave a trace of their soul and body on this earth.

Imagine me as a scented candle

Oh, so magical

Oh, so pretty

Oh, how I'll light up your city

Imagine me as a scented candle

When you burn me

You free me

And my hidden scents embrace your soul throughly

Imagine me as a scented candle

Your spirits are eased

Your mind is released

And I am here for your service and please

Imagine me as a scented candle

When my wax is used

And my wick is abused

All that's left of me is the scent in you

Reviews

[McBear]

I really liked it. Full of deep meaning. This is my second time doing this, since my PC had an issue. I hope you like this.. I edited it for you. Not sure if you forgot some grammar.

Imagine me as a scented candle. Added Period
Oh, so magical. Added Period
Oh, so pretty. Added Period
Oh, how I'll light up your city. Added Period

Imagine me as a scented candle. Added Period
When you burn me, Added Comma
you free me. Added Period and Lower-Cased the "Y"
and my hidden scents embrace your soul thoroughly Fixed miss-spelled word and lower cased the "A"

Imagine me as a scented candle.

[Omikron]

Thanks. Sometimes I do overlook some grammar rules to create a dramatic feeling and give the poem more depth, however in this case I like your corrected version better!

[McBear]

Ah, I see what you're saying. Hehe. Thank you!

[Ella]

Wow beautiful piece with a deeper meaning. It tells an amazing yet sad story of the footprints we leave behind when we eventually disappear off the face of the earth

[annalysiar]

Noo this is very nicely written, I was torn between seeing it as spiritual or passion filled... Its a good verse especially the first and last lines, which portray feelings of life and love..

[Saraswati]

its way too spiritual...a good write..liked the last part of this poem..