I don't miss you

The heart forgives
The brain forgets
Time passes by
Babysteps

My fingers don't miss
The touch of you
My nose isn't lusting
Your strong perfume

My eyes don't see
What once was real
My soul is at peace
So why won't the wounds heal?

Author's Note

Picture by TheCauseOf at DeviantArt!

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Reviews

[mum]

LOVE this one . wish it would have kept going .. almost feels like it should have .. like a to be continued kind of thing .

[Omikron]

I guess it's the same thing with love, often we wish it would have continued longer but it always hurts the most when it's cut short...... Glad you liked it!

// O

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The thing is we may forgive but we never ever forget.. It takes a lot of time and courage to do that.. Even though we appear strong a moment comes when all hell breaks lose.. we reach at the breaking point.. where we can;t take in anymore.. All in all a beautiful and meaning write up.. I liked reading this...

[Omikron]

Thank you!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Ella]

Things take time. They heal at different rates. When someone hurts you, when they break you, you heal in pieces. Slowly. You did a great job of representing that. The heart, brain, soul,eyes, etc they healed and in time your whole being will heal. Once all the little pieces of you have been repaired that's when you can finally be put back together. Great job! I enjoyed this very much. Keep it up! :)

[Omikron]

I absolutely agree with you, thanks for the review!

[-]

Great question at the end. It seems like it does take a long while for the scars that someone left behind to heal. I poem is very enjoyable and awesome finish. Thanks for sharing. N.

[Omikron]

Thanks for the comment. :)

// Omikron