BREAKDOWN!

BREAKDOWN!

A Poem by Endless Rain

BREAKDOWN! time to shine
BREAKDOWN! time is mine
BREAKDOWN! (RAWR)


Would you want me to change my identity?
Would you want me if it were meant to be?

She said (I hate you)
She said (I don't love you)
She said (You need to get away)

Why have you forsaken me
Do you even remember me?
I was loyal to you all this time
Now I'm not worth a dime?

She said (give it a rest)
She said (you're such a mess)
She said (you're not the best)


Tell me why you have broken me apart
Tell me why you broke my heart
Tell me to my face that I am worth nothing!
At least then I can be something!

BREAKDOWN! time to shine
BREAKDOWN! Forgetting you this time
BREAKDOWN! (RAWR)

© 2008 Endless Rain


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Tell me why you have broken me apart
Tell me why you broke my heart
Tell me to my face that I am worth nothing!
At least then I can be something!

BREAKDOWN! time to shine
BREAKDOWN! Forgetting you this time
BREAKDOWN! (RAWR)

my favs of this poem and i can tell you many of times when i have had a break down and they arnt fun! Remember i'm here if ya need a shoulder lean on! and i'm here if ya need to talk/vent!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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She said (give it a rest)
She said (you're such a mess)
She said (you're not the best)

Tell me why you have broken me apart
Tell me why you broke my heart
Tell me to my face that I am worth nothing!
At least then I can be something!

BREAKDOWN! time to shine
BREAKDOWN! Forgetting you this time
BREAKDOWN! (RAWR)

I'd love to hear this sung, this is a killer songwrite, I love this it's amazing

Posted 17 Years Ago


Tell me why you have broken me apart
Tell me why you broke my heart
Tell me to my face that I am worth nothing!
At least then I can be something!

BREAKDOWN! time to shine
BREAKDOWN! Forgetting you this time
BREAKDOWN! (RAWR)

my favs of this poem and i can tell you many of times when i have had a break down and they arnt fun! Remember i'm here if ya need a shoulder lean on! and i'm here if ya need to talk/vent!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 1, 2008

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Endless Rain
Endless Rain

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Age: Almost 22 Profession: Solo musician/writer I can sing and I've been playing guitar since I was the age of 4. Favorite Music: Melodic Death Metal Interests: Music/Writing Love or Hate Me .. more..