Give Love A Chance

Give Love A Chance

A Poem by Endless Rain
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My heart breaks yet again

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Was I wrong to love you?
I thought love always grew
I gave you my heart
You ripped it all apart
I gave you my soul
You ripped it all apart
I said I loved you
You ripped me apart
Now you just ignore me

"Am I not worthy?"

Like a sick dog I can't attack
Like a sick dog I want you back
I loved you so much as a friend
Oh you were such a God send
I loved you for being you
I thought love always grew
In a sick way I still love you
I guess our love was never true
You never gave love a chance
You never gave love a dance
Tonight I will be alone
I'm far better off on my own

© 2008 Endless Rain


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sadness..... outrageously good. nice job.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Like a sick dog I can't attack
Like a sick dog I want you back
I loved you so much as a friend
Oh you were such a God send
I loved you for being you
I thought love always grew
In a sick way I still love you
I guess our love was never true

Oh! Such powerful words, such an emotional write here, I throughly liked this write bunches. Straight from your heart here, well done my friend.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Snap Snap Snap, i truly love this piece great write..

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tonight I will be alone
I'm far better off on my own

this is so me... because i have come to the conclusion that i'm going to be alone for the rest of my life!

Very good poem... i loved it... Itchy you do a good job with your poetry

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 4, 2008

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Endless Rain
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Age: Almost 22 Profession: Solo musician/writer I can sing and I've been playing guitar since I was the age of 4. Favorite Music: Melodic Death Metal Interests: Music/Writing Love or Hate Me .. more..