Corrupted Love

He said...

I loved you every day
I wish you would stay
Do you understand how I feel?
Do you understand this is real?

I loved you again today
But you went away
Do you really understand me?
Do you understand what you see?
 

She Said....

I don't really care
I thought you were aware
Did you misunderstand me?
Did you really see?

I don't love you anymore
I'm pushing you out the door
Can you finally see I don't love you?
I really thought you knew..
I just don't love you

Reviews

[Shugotenshi1692]

i know what you mean. good poem.

[Andie]

I like it a lot. The rhythm is unadulterated and smooth. Not forced. (on a technical note, the light pink font is a bit difficult to read)

[Starting Over]

Awe that was a sad poem and i can feel it becuase its like thes guys part on here is me and the only 4 guys who i ever tried to give me heart to was like the girls part!

I really feel this poem and i love it!