Broken Passion

It's about a love gone wrong...

He broke her heart
He made her cry
He trashed her love and tore her apart
He pretended to care and gave a mournful sigh
She lost all hope, and failed to keep her promise
He took her passion and burnt her smile
She screamed and cursed his life, with this
He spoke of a tragic loss, which wasn’t worth while
She painted his name in blood upon the wall
With no time to lose, quickly she began her spell
She had no waste, he couldn’t stall
Deep down, into the darkness he fell.
Once she saw him she gave a smirk
As her shadows united and began to lurk
For, as soon as he fell
She attacked, for he had entered her torturous, broken passioned hell.

 

Author's Note

I would just like to know what you think ^-^

Reviews

[LostandAlone]

I really like this.. It's dark and deep and very beautifully written.. Wonderful write..