I Tickled Your World

I tickled your
world today.
as down and silk
brushed your thighs

I gently rubbed
in her cleave
cutting softly,
with machining sighs

Her heaving mounds
sent off quivers,
yielding only
to my touch

Her strata
quaked and trembled.
as I burrowed
in  her warm chasm.

Yes

I tickled your
reality today
as you dreamed
not of me

~Outdoors2

 
 

Reviews

[Kiddx]

"I tickled your
reality today
as you dreamed
not of me "

I like your closing lines, kind of cute in a way, the rest of the poem "WOW" steamy, and passionate.

[Angel's Lady]

sexual and sensual, yet not somehow....

[Last Lying Look]

hm. I liked this poem.
Good write!