Faithful Hour

A Poem by P.H. Carver

In my dying breath,

I sing out to you,

Grant me this my freedom,

All for you.

Grant me this oh Lord in my hour of need,

So that I may be faithful,

To you others I shall lead.

© 2011 P.H. Carver

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Cherrie

Faitful Hour has a strong title it tells of both follower and God

Posted 14 Years Ago

EMF	A wonderful a prayer as you';; find. Wonderful write. Loved every word, and needs no alteration nor review Posted 14 Years Ago A wonderful a prayer as you';; find. Wonderful write. Loved every word, and needs no alteration nor review Rating /100

...	wonderful write here, enjoyed Posted 14 Years Ago wonderful write here, enjoyed Rating /100

Dove	This beautiful piece shows your faith and what faith is truly about. Very nice. Keep up the great work and stay faithful:) Posted 14 Years Ago This beautiful piece shows your faith and what faith is truly about. Very nice. Keep up the great work and stay faithful:) Rating /100

Penlady

Speaks of deep faith and is truly what faith is all about. Lovely prayer.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on October 15, 2011
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P.H. Carver

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I have much to learn and the time to learn it. I've been reading books since I learned how, but the whole world of writing is new to me. I love making new friends. "Blessed are those, Who write .. more..