When you Realize

about distinguishing what's between love and the illusions of it

I can't concentrate because of the constant thoughts in my head, jagged around the corners on my mind they paint elusions or maybe truth, it forces self examination to fix a problem but if its nonexistent how can one solve the mysteries that is shrouded by doubt or the willingness to accept a dreaded faith, or maybe, just maybe the reality lays in plain sight but with eyes wide shut and dreaming under false pretenses sobers a bitter reality. Empty words were they, actions with a smile or so I thought seeing the true smirk as the mask fell off, disappointed maybe, but love isn’t evil is the claim of those words by evil elements that causes pain 

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

Awesome! An interesting process realization...

[Sami Khalil]

When your heart echoes all your being in the act of submission and sacrifice you know you are in love and not in an illusion. Realizationa are your truth of experiences ( emotional or spiritual ) magnified beyond the shadow of a doubt. You live it and tell it and it becomes a part of who you are...Bravo

[Micheal Abraham]

thank you for your view on this piece much appreciated

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:0.................

[Karleem Johnson]

I think that it's very good :D Practice makes perfect though, so never start trying :)

[Eddie Phillips]

Love is a action word. When we say we love someone we have to show it. I love how you try to work through the illusion and the truth of real love. It was a rampaging write that tore into the truth of it. Great job!