I Write in the Nude

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I Write in the Nude

 

I write in the nude

 

       it helps me see things

 

    --  all things  --

 

   more clearly.

 

My blond, slightly red covering

 

   my deep blue

 

       and red veins,

 

   my ample equipment

 

   and the mole at -

 

       the end of my nose..

 

For you see

 

       i feel

 

   the wind

 

       of change

 

          touch every fold of my skin.

 

   i sense the tremors

 

       of upcoming

 

   earthly vibrations

 

       with every exposed follicle.

 

And the Sun

 

   absorbs the reflection

 

       of my opalescent sheath

 

   and gives me back

 

          life..

 

 

[I am exposed

   for anyone who looks

       to see --

   and the prospect of danger

       fills my human heart

          with expectation...]

 

 

Chef Paul Seaman

Reviews

[MOON]

Lovely write we are exposing ourselves literally when we right its our deepest secrets .

[Paul Seaman]

i should prolly be more discreet :-0 but life is short and the cost of true feelings is much less than the price of hiding them.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I think that this is a clever literary exposure of one's exposed self, there is much integrety in your poignent, honest, sentiments, nice work

[Paul Seaman]

thank you, the eHarmony girl I have been speaking to in Canada was upset I published this one, thought it was too private... I do not know... I have always believed life can be long or short, we never know.... And we need to speak our minds, live the lives we were designed to live and not to some degree, really expose ourselves as we truly are,to those we trust. I also beleive trust is given until there is a reason for it to be revoked... What do you thinks of such things..

[SHEEMA HUQ]

acting singing all performance, being a chef infact I believe are highly revealing occupations, singers and musicians have commented to me in the past, that live performance is rather like being completley naked, i liked your poem, the philosophy behind it and commend your courage

[Paul Seaman]

...thanks...