Dirty Dungeon!

A brazed joint

Reconciled polar ends.

Hyphenated "him to her and her to him".

There was no intrusion, that brought in confusion;

Vices of him, drove her away;

To a very dirty dungeon,

When she got messy

He cried away,

Tearful pain, 

Dis-joint! 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you use the language. Artwork and strong statements create thoughts and visions. Each line in the poem was strong and had purpose. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[PP]

Thank you Coyote for your ever so kind words. I intend to keep my poems simple but meaningful. It gives me immense confidence to write more when someone as experienced in writing as you are, sees through my poems, feels my words and think it is a good write. I value every opinion of yours.

Thank you Coyote :)

[Joe Milton]

Loving the metaphors. I'm guessing that there is some sense in which the simplicity and beauty communicated in the structure obfuscates and contrasts with an ostensive use of chaos and complexity. Whatever. The poem is neat and professional whichever way I look at it.

[PP]

I am honoured Joe! Love the way you have used utter posh words in reviewing my piece of randomness:) I am so glad to see you here and Welcome to Writer's Cafe. I will look forward to your lively creations. Btw How are you doing?

[Joe Milton]

I'm good. Actually was on facebook rather than writer's cafe (I was intrigued by your Email to GOD link). But yeah, actually I could make use of this excellent site. That's a pretty cool idea.

[DrD]

This demands the reader to search between the lines and call upon imagination. I did and what I found was a lovely piece of work that carries a raw, biting message that remained somehow a marvel to read.

[PP]

Thank you D! I am glad you've dug deep to capture the real mood of this write:)