Sneeze...

Its really cold outside..lol

You may feel a little run down at times 

'cos the weather is frosty outside 

Chilled wind could give you few sneezes 

or temperature of unusual Fahrenheit

You may feel ill with apprehension that you may not recover 

But aye..'the weather isn't that bad either' 

Fades away the blue 

With the rising sun..

Like any other day 

You will spring back to a life of your own. 

Don't let the germs get you diseased 

For remember what- You aren't yet deceased! 

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

This poem has a very cool flow of increasing stability. What I mean to say, is that as you read the poem you feel more confident that you are not the only one thinking about this kind of thing, and while that is occurring , you also start understanding that it's kinda true ...those stuff are minors , as compared to the fact that you are still alive and breathing, as to say that those stuff don't actually matter much, thus change your mood, and inhabit a better mood.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a bad day will not last forever, eternity will...kind of a message between the lines in this one...yes.

nice write

jacob