Colors..

There is a black hole 

In every red heart 

Flows out of it; crimson hues 

And fills brown body parts 

Through dark green eyes 

Watches the yellow brain 

Rivers running blue 

And stars shining in silvery May

Stunning orange sun rise in the heaven 

Spreading golden bliss 

On cold grey hearts 

Colorful people construe rainbows 

With vibrant dyes of life 

reproduce pink 

floating in the turquoise bliss

Are violet feathers of peace 

Harmony in colors 

just like an orchestrated symphony 

Red, Blue or Green - They all sing a song 

They sing with life 

They sing to life 

Only the soul;

So impeccably white

Stands alone with a chance to hear the melody. 

Reviews

[Zahra]

such a colourful poem. :) beautiful.

[Eileenws]

I like colors and you do a good job of using many colors. I hope that everyone's soul can hear the melody and take away whatever we need. Nicely done. Eileen

[PP]

Thank you Eilenn, I am glad you enjoyed it :)

[Ami Bovurd]

luvly

[quinfinn]

this poem truly is "just like an orchestrated symphony" i haven't visualized this many colors since my hippie days , but you have worded this piece so beautifully, such magnificent descriptive quality and all the while abstract and strangely alien...while feeling so relevant. it takes a creative mind and a masterful pen to put together this calibre of write. brilliantly done.

[PP]

Thank you so very much for your beautiful review :) Colors make life livelier and I am a Big Fan of multi-colored Paisley prints...lol

[quinfinn]

i too, enjoy color...can't say i own paisley anymore, but i remember it! you are welcome, and thank you for your friend request, you are, of course, welcome.

[PP]

My pleasure to have you as a friend :) will look forward to your writings !

[quinfinn]

*smiling*

[PP]

:)

[Henry]

Wow, it's a treat to be able to put on lenses that see through someone else's eyes. I drank this up like a bowl of the sun. The finale of white was my favourite part. Like opening your eyes after a dreaming session of passing illusions. Stunning!

[PP]

Thank you Henry, this is an awesome review! It has made my day :)

[CreativeStroke]

This was very creative! :) I loved how each line told an intricate story all on its own, exuding a beautiful color in the process. It came together beautifully!

[PP]

Thank you so much, I am so glad you liked it :)

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem, full of charm that exudes the colors in contains.

[PP]

Thank you Leslie :)

[Lina Grey]

"They all sing a sing" ...song, I tink that scond word should be? anyway, a beautiful write. I love colors, all colors, and I like how you fit them all together to represent life, nature, and spirit. Even amidst shades of a rainbow, there is beautiful symbology :)

[PP]

thank you Lina for this beautiful review:) It is a 'song', I will tell you what I have read this poem myself so many times but never spotted the error, guess subconsciously I was reading it as 'song'!! Thank you for bringing it to notice :)

[Lina Grey]

You're welcome :) I've done that many a time myself, really. I know what should be there so that's what I see. I think that's why reviewing each other's work is such a big deal in school... :)

[B-poet]

A dynamic piece of writing. Each color represents an adaptation of life in regards to the harmony of a human spirit. Great write. You style is quite distinctive and revealing as the text paints a perfect picture of colorful written art. :)

[PP]

thank you for such kind words :)

[Sami Khalil]

floating in the turquoise bliss

Are violet feathers of peace

Harmony in colors

just like an orchestrated symphony

Red, Blue or Green - They all sing a sing
My faves in this well penned piece .

[PP]

Thank you Sami, great to see you pass by :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep . I was in the neighborhood so I thought to stop by ...You are welcome...:)

[PP]

lol... you did good :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)