Blindfold

Blind-fold me and be my eyes 

guide my vision 

To the paradise 

Take me with you 

To far and near 

To beaches and their blues 

I will come with you 

Dance with me like 

Waves do..

Dirty and Flirty moves 

I will dance with you

I will quench your thirst 

and you can feed my hunger 

We can

Water each other's souls 

When they are on fire 

Let me throw upon you 

my garments of satin hues 

Watch me

I will bare my heart out to you..

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i also like "we can water each other's souls"

great line..i feel the trust in this poem...so much that the speaker feels she and her lover can be flirtatious or serious...sexy and loving...just be natural with each other...

so let the fire burn.

[PP]

Thank you Jacob for your very beautiful words :)

[Rob Santana]

The first line is really clever wording. "We can water each other's souls when they are on fire" awesome, I love those words. well written.

[PP]

Thank you ever so much Creeper :)

[jerrypat]

"Blind-fold me and be my eyes"

This intriguing opening line gave birth unto me a myriad of thoughts definitely of the blue nature. Each line following did little to stop the images in my thoughts from forming.

"I will quench your thirst
and you can feed my hunger"

. . . and so it went and I was there, standing outside peering through an opened window, my voyeurism barely held at bay. Ah, just having a bit of fun here, Prathama Panigrahi, but I can say I thoroughly enjoyed your excellent poem and will be looking for more gems such as this from you in the future.

[PP]

Wow Jerry I can't believe how keenly you have felt this poem, so glad you did! This is our first encounter at Cafe and I am really pleased to meet you..I will visit you soon and can't wait to go through your marvelous pieces! Thank you again :)

[jerrypat]

I have only two poems up, but will be posting daily I hope. Thank you for your interest.

[PP]

Most definitely will look forward to those :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I will quench your thirst

and you can feed my hunger

We can

Water each other's souls

When they are on fire."
Wow. This one will set hearts and pages on fire...A very well penned poem...:)

[PP]

Thank you Sami for your very kind words :) They are spoken straight from the heart !

[Sami Khalil]

I know. You are welcome...:)

[PP]

:)))

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)