History of Creation

The more I see, the more I think... The more I think, the more I write..

What if 'mankind' was a great big mistake 

In the history of creation? 

Like a bubble shower in the laboratory

of a very mad genius..

A mix and match of pure and poison

with the bitter honey notion 

An irreversible reaction

Mankind wasn't the art of imagination 

- Never was in good intention 

The birth of human generation..

We are all guinea pigs in some kind of an experimentation..

   

 

Reviews

[Emily Feret]

Like a bubble shower in the laboratory
of a very mad genius..

I like this poem, but that is a sad thought indeed

[PP]

Thanks Emily for your review :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

An interesting look at our insane world. Excellent read and write.

[PP]

Thank you Brandon! Will go through your writings soon :)

[quinfinn]

awesome write and some very provocative thinking here. i love it!

[PP]

Thank you Quin for this lovely review :)

[quinfinn]

anytime.....!

[PP]

:)

[Dream Weaver]

Now you've got me thinking? What if...it could be plausible ya know ;)

[PP]

Let's make it a theory, shall we? LOL

[Dream Weaver]

I could wile away the hours
Conferrin' with the flowers
Consultin' with the rain
And my head I'd be scratchin'
While my thoughts were busy hatchin'
If I only had a brain

I'd unravel any riddle
For any individ'le
In trouble or in pain

(Dorothy)
With the thoughts you'd be thinkin'
You could be another Lincoln
If you only had a brain

(Scarecrow)
Oh, I would tell you why
The ocean's near the shore
I could think of things I never thunk before
And then I'd sit and think some more

I would not be just a nuffin'
My head all full of stuffin'
My heart all full of pain
I would dance and be merry
Life would be a ding-a-derry
If I only had a brain

[PP]

hahahahaha...what a poem!!! If I only had a brain..Joe this is getting awesome!

[PP]

Depicts the brains of the mad genius of my poem! Only if he knew what on Earth he was doing LOL

[Dream Weaver]

Well my dear I figured since we were doing some heavy thinking here...henceforth the song "if I only had a brain" Hehehe!

[PP]

Lets sing along at least it will startle the mad-man in his lab!

[quinfinn]

hey, isn't that george w's theme song?

[Dream Weaver]

LOL now that would be a sight to see...us singing on a silent poetry site! I can feel my creative juices flowing as we speak! :)~

[PP]

hahaha..written melody! Now Quin has joined as well and soon Frieda will! We will have a band here!

[Dream Weaver]

One big happy family ;)

[Frieda P]

This is a definite holy cats moment! Let me peek into your mind, and beyond, I want to see genius at work. Amazing thoughts here, you rock. Not so far fetched if you really think about it either...!

[PP]

haha Frieda, you make me rock! Thank you for peeking into my mind..yellow matter did you find? Lol

[Frieda P]

Actually it was shades of brilliance mixed in with a quirky color of moxy!

[Dream Weaver]

Yes Frieda but what if? what then ? ;)

[PP]

Very unusual are we! And yet again we are chatting away about the breed of our brains..haha

[Frieda P]

Then I"m a follower of Tinkerism! ;-)

[Frieda P]

What brain, maybe yours, mine fell down the rabbit hole on the way to Oz eons ago!

[PP]

wow this is a Eureka Moment! We can now change the history of mankind with a bit of Tinkerism! Freida, I daren't look inside your brain just cos of the fear of losing my eyesight..the glare will be brighter than sunlight upclose!

[Dream Weaver]

I would not be just a nuffin'
My head all full of stuffin'
My heart all full of pain
read moreI would not be just a nuffin'
My head all full of stuffin'
My heart all full of pain
I would dance and be merry
Life would be a ding-a-derry
If I only had a brain

[PP]

@Frieda look Joe to back to get sandwiched again! HAHA @Joe welcome to our brain conversation!

[Dream Weaver]

;) I just love me some sandwhiching and brain canoodling :P

[PP]

@Joe feasting on words brain feels better!

[Dream Weaver]

LOL I'm so glad!

[Frieda P]

pfft, can't leave you guys alone for a minute! ;-P

[PP]

You are the lead singer of our newly formed band Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Oi, I'm tone deaf, can't I just dance like an idiot? ;-)

[PP]

@Joe what do ya think about Frieda's proposition? LOL

[quinfinn]

this, i gotta see!

[Frieda P]

Lol, you ever watch Elaine dance on Seinfeld? That x's 100 ;-P

[quinfinn]

you kidding? i want elaine to have my babies!

[Frieda P]

Now why doesn't that surprise me?

[quinfinn]

i give up.....why?

[Frieda P]

cause you're cuckoo for cocoa puffs

[quinfinn]

i'm your huckleberry.....

[PP]

haha! Can't stop laughing

[Frieda P]

NO SOUP FOR YOU!

[quinfinn]

bwahahahahahahahah! frieda is the soup nazi.....nyuk, nyuk, nyuk

[PP]

hahahaha!!!

[Frieda P]

Actually I think that's the kimmer after her f*****g soup read!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Prathama, Not so half baked really. I think we were simply a bi product of other processes going on in the universe

[PP]

ayeeee I see a great possibility there John, guess Earth is the chemical waste depository! Lol

[Pete Langley]

Not as crazy as some hypotheses, Prathama! It could be the basis for a new religion! Well thought out, love. P.

[PP]

Thank you Pete! Never thought about it that way..but I see the potential! LOL :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like God is some jekyll and hyde...in his lab....yelling out "it's alive, it's alive!"

sometimes society does seem to me to be a mistake...if only he knew what we would do to ourselves..

excellent poem.

[PP]

hahahaha Jacob reminds me of 'Eureka, Eureka'! Many thanks :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are welcome...and stop by my page sometime, would love to have a visit from you.

jacob

[Rita L. Sev]

Well this certainly makes me think! What if? So many people act like animals (while so many animals are humane...) perhaps it is just a big experiment gone awry. Excellent!

[PP]

Thank you Rita..so true! See you are a Dog Lover, me too and your Doggie is sooooooooooo cute :))))

[Rita L. Sev]

Ty! :)

[PP]

:)