Scorpion Lady!

She's a straight talker
She kisses no a*s
Sucks no butt,
Pulls no favours
To please others!

Judges nobody
Praises no one without a cause,
Doesn't smile at someone she hates
Cries not with the person that deserves not!

Rewards ones she likes
With the promise of life
Hates the ones she hates
With immense spite!

Glare of her piercing eyes
Rips naked the strongest of man
Her passion is fiery
Sets the water to boil!

She crawls
She stings
She wriggles
She bites
She loves
She hates
Does it all with full delight..

From tip to tail
Attitude prevails
Walk on the right side
Of a scorpion lady!

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Another Scorpio? You have a passion that invigorates this old soul. Excellent read and write. Bravo!

[Pete Langley]

OOOOoooo I do like a woman with spirit!!! (I was married to one for 46 years) Well you write, Prathama. P.

[Frieda P]

Ha, 'kisses no a*s, sucks no butt'...if someone had laid this before me without a name, I'd have known it was yours Tink!

'Attitude prevails'...write on! ;-)

[PP]

haha Frieda you know moi full well! x

[Frieda P]

Hey it's cleverly full of Tink moxy, who else? ha x

[PP]

haha, I got to pay you a visit very soon, just to see what is cooking in that mind of yours!

[Michael G. Smith]

But, how does she sleep at night?

[PP]

She turns into a Bat! LOL

[jacob erin-cilberto]

terrific metaphor...scary but sexy at the same time...a strong women really shouldn't be feared, but loved and respected for having her strength...

nice imagery and analogy in this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sounds like a woman of integrity and sensuality...
nicely done

let's get one thing straight, I am the scorpion :)